Black Poetry : A FRIEND

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by L.P, May 30, 2004.

  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A friend is there to break your fall.
    A friend is there when you call.
    A friend has your back.
    A friend will keep you on the right track.
    A friend will show the true heart.
    True friends are hard to break apart.
    A friend won't do you wrong.
    When you're in need a friend won't leave you alone.
    A friend will catch your tears when you cry.
    A true friend will tell you the truth,not a lie.
    A true friend is hard to find.
    Through thick-in-thin.
    That's your true friend.

    BE SAFE
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So tru, so tru...

    A friend knows what's goin on
    Just by the silence on the phone
    A friend knows how to be real with you
    More than just one of the gurls
    A friend tells you no
    Because she knows you don't need it
    A friend gives you advice
    Because sometimes she sees ****
    That you might can't see
    That you might not know
    Places where you can't go
    She'll try her best to show
    That it's not that great
    Or struggle to take you there
    Because a tru friend knows
    That just bein there shows you care
    Tru friends
    Tru friends
    So hard to find
    So glad I have one tru friend because
    1 real one is better than nine

    (fake ones) hee-hee just thoughts...

    Nice one :toast:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved your piece on A Friend LP, I liked the way it flowed in a very real vibe. Serenti, I enjoyed your response in a flow as well, so true.
     
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    dstny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've heard something like this before....but so true
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice poem keep ya pen moving my sister! ;)
     
  6. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FOR THE WORDS.
    BY THE WAY L.P IS A BROTHER.
    BE SAFE
     
  7. YungMiss

    YungMiss Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Poems :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said a true friend can be so much
     
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