Black Poetry : A friend of mine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Jan 31, 2003.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is this guy that I know
    Whose company I enjoy
    I like him in a way,
    but not quite sure.

    I mean it’s fanatical,
    How “up and down” I am regarding him
    The same things I admire, are the same things that mystify my psyche.
    Which is not all-bad, cause it keeps me in suspense
    Wanting to identify with him and his being.
    Yet at the same time I need reassurance of his liking to me
    And if he could see in me what I see for “us”
    Then there is this sort of “lovehatelike” thing
    Which is fine by me
    Cause I don’t seem to handle the
    “Falling in too deep” thing too well
    His greatness is set at comfort level to me
    But then his nonchalant persona seems to
    Give me indifferent feelings towards his stance
    Towards me and mine
    Wait!!!
    I am going off on the deep end here…..
    Now where was I ….
    Oh yeah right
    There is this guy,
    not quite sure…yada yada yada…
    oh and he acknowledges me as his friend.
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always a burning question..whether or not to take a friendship to a next level without destroying it....

    I just loved the way you ended this...

    K
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the way you played with this...

    That is the wonder of love it makes no sense it is not rational, it simply is ...in many different forms!

    Blessings On ya House!
     
  4. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for all the love!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we all fine self in this and the mystory of love
    love how u clash dis flow or reality
     
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