Black Poetry : A Freestyle of the mind

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet surrenders
    in a heavenly bliss
    tangled up with heavy emotions
    bound by affections so rare
    Seized by the perfect moment
    gestures of quiet pleasures
    untold and hid from the world
    now resurfacing to the top
    of waves spreading over
    mountains and hills
    cascading forcefully
    by the winds of everlasting
    endless rhyming
    and perfect timing for this
    awesome piece
    of Afro American pie

    wrapped up in amazement
    developed age old lyrics
    steaming from this pot of
    gumbo poetry
    mixed with all kinds of ideas
    and wishes
    hopes
    and dreams


    Constantly rising
    and reaching boiling point
    forever letting this flow go
    and reach the highest pillar
    and the tallest tower
    of imagination
    so joyous
    peaceful and serene

    Fire spreading all over the mind
    intoxicating floetic
    poetry so sublime
    and extending as far
    as the east is from the west
    and as far as New York is
    from New Orleans
    but feeling the same love
    within stretching and
    expanding
    heart everlasting in this gumbo pot
    of wordz....
    A freestyle of the mind!!!!
    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    free ya mind and da rest will follow
    a mix vibe in many scribes
    a pot of flows
    many poetry shows
    like a daily dish
    of wishies & prayers
    smiles n' laughter
    da sorrow of tears
    a mix of poetic embraces
    from da open mind
    freestyling
     
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    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Super Super Tyte......What else can I say
     
  4. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $RICH$... always good 2 hear from my poetic brotha

    Dre'... Always a pleasure whenever u reply to anything I scribe...
    Much Love 2 Ya...
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um, this was phat
    this read like a picture

    DSS
     
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    this poem was captured midstream

    with flooding/inundated thoughts

    keep scribin :)

    pd
     
  7. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank u DSS & Poeticdelight for responding
    glad u guys liked it
    I appreciate all the love fam
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freestyling oh Freestyling ! (grease)

    liked this one it had style
    and it was free!


    beautifull piece poet
     
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