Black Poetry : A freak on the loose is like a leak in the roof makes a mess

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Nov 28, 2007.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A freak on the loose is like a leak in the roof makes a mess
    Of things when they try impress with bling and fake finesse
    Flows bare and expose to air like afro hair have to comb
    My dome all my fruits are homegrown, eat holding the phone
    Strong and wild while on trial know the pride of the court
    As they provide support and make decisions solid as forts
    Never a fake soldier ready to take over rap as it overlaps
    With garbage and knowledge go to college and learn bolder crap
    Pause for fame and that cause pain lots of flaws in the game
    Laws can tame with handcuffs plans scuffed to hell on cocaine
    Selling and drugs police dogs smelling rugs to sniff out drug dealers
    Like ships go float my best and promote progress on the waters
    Of success and slaughter the best MC’S by drowning in alphabetical order
    To position lyrical firearms require charm and bullet rhymes
    **** the trigger being a hot figure and fire lyrics from a divine
    Loaded mouth, noted down south as funk with crunk in mind
    Strive to survive and stay alive this every day jive can find
    Away to bring you down hard to cling to a crown and be a king
    Been a friend but now intend to hit tagets on legit markets and sting
    The pockets of the Davy Crockettes wanting to be king of this wild
    Frontier no fun here tying to compete with the weak street freestyles
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Show some love...

    Charity begins at home

    So show them freaks some love ~ MAD WRITE :smokin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ......freaks need some love too ...lol
     
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