Black Poetry : A Fools WANTS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MoEffective, Apr 2, 2002.

  1. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want......

    I want to mean more to you

    I want to be the one you compair everyone else to

    I want for you notice me

    I want to be your everything and then sum, openly

    I want passion before breakfast

    I want to leave you shook and breathless

    I want to drink you till I'm thirsty

    I want to wear clothes you bought me for my birthday

    I want to be selfish

    I want for you to need me when you're helpless

    I want to kiss you

    I want to hear you say "I miss you"

    I want my number on your automatic redial

    I want to be the word that makes YOU smile

    I want to feel you next to me

    I want love, progressively

    I want to be your favorite food

    I want to satisfy your groove

    I want to hold you in the bath

    I guess I want what I can't have

    YOU.

    AND YOU HAVEN'T THE SLIGHTEST

    IDEA.......


    MO (c) 2002
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmm...
    i luuuv this flow!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all da time
    all da time
    but that's the fun of it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MO...... i know dis too well...... i want yet don't have
    so i seek what seem to be like what i dreameth of .....
    u pose da ribbon of truth ......keep flowin'
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight, I likes it.
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow. I think everyone feels this at some point. I know I certainly have, in fact I'm kinda in one of those moments right now, so can totally relate. Great piece with a tyte flow.
    *Emma*
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece. Kept me moving with it.

    BE
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MoE.


    okay! so...i'm not crazy. :eek:

    i was lookin' at this goin'... "i just KNOW
    i've responded to this already"... but i
    didn't see my name. so you'll have to
    check da otha one to find my true response
    to this heah! :D
     
  9. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To ALL WHO RESPONDED

    Ya'll truly know how to make another feel good.

    oh and yeah there are two of these out there. I messed up on the first one, but glad to see ya still wit me.

    I've had conversations wit people who want someone so bad they can taste it. I know I am feelin that at this point as well, so i hit the NEW TOPIC button and let it flow. It's hurt that you have so much to say to this one human, but constriction sets in and ya lips can't move. I guess I'll have to keep eyein' them from a distance. DAAAAAMN, DAAAAAAAAAAMN, DAAAAAAAMN

    I THANK EACH OF YOU.......destee fam is the root of truth
     
  10. MoEffective

    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee FAM

    I just wanted to say, that being able to put your heart on paper and to have people such as the ones who encompas this site, a connection on so many levels. I'm glad to be a part of it all.
     
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