Black Poetry : A fool for love!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A fool for love?
    I can't believe this has happened again.
    I thought you were my lover and my friend.
    A fool for love?
    That's not who I am, I just know that this
    is truly the end.
    To many times I have bowed in submission.
    And in doing so I gave you unspoken permission.
    To lead me down the aisle of sinful commission.
    You said you love me?
    But you haven't bothered to get a divorce.
    I told you I would be patient.
    But this is not the course...
    To true love and understanding.
    I could tell you that the Heartbreak ship
    had landed.
    You didn't buy me flowers or send me
    a valentine.
    Though I recieved all these things they
    were from these friends of mine.
    Tried to give you a second chance.
    But , you still won't own your feelings.
    And that in and within itself is often
    very revealing.
    So time has come for me to close
    the chapter.
    A fool for love...No more you see.
    I have to do what is best for me.
    Blessings on Ya house!
    BJS(C)2003
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel ya mslusious....this poem....
    i reseaved nothing from the person i hoped
    would send me sumhing ecept for my friends.....last years i didnt had no respond to.....it hurts ..
    but but as long as you have youre loving friends nd famly you,re goin to be alright......
    always do whats best for you
    and you will find treu love
    i,m feelings ya sista
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my sista!

    You're words move me. And your compassion has soothed me, if someone who has such a beautiful soul as you has problems getting a brotha to do right, then "It ain't us!" It's them wrong minded men who gravitate to our beauty and loving ways.
    This means more to me than anything that Hallmark could ever say! Thank you for being a friend and for supporting me and all the sista's who have done so. You are so special and you have to know that and if you ever need a friend I am here for you just like you have been here for me all week. Thanks a million!:grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this!
    Don't give up on love, and keep doing the thang!
    Peace and love to you! If it ain't good, it ain't love.
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm a fool too

    I feel you gurrl. I am a fool a million times. I didn't have a valentine either, and that didn't bother me so much cuz I have many friends who are worth more than the sad blokes who call themselves men. What can I say, I shall still fall in love again!!
     
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