Black Poetry : A Floral Masterpiece

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I look at these flowers,
    appreciating each petal, it occurs to me
    that each color holds a thread
    to an intricate tapestry.
    For the truth of the matter is,
    the petals of white
    reveal a void in me, perhaps
    you can fill it, one day you just might.
    The yellow flower, my sunshine,
    makes me smile as warmth radiates thru.
    A promise of golden sun rays shall
    permeate those layers that shield you
    away from possible harm. The magenta
    petals beckon us to reach out,
    dare to be aware of the intoxicating,
    alluring beauty of what love is about.
    The red one, the valentine,
    the heart of the bouquet, the souls core,
    intoxicates us into needing to drink
    each others souls all the more
    until our desires are momentarily quenched
    with the sweat of bodies spent
    from the arousal of mental into physical
    and all the passion truly meant
    to seal our love in all its bliss.
    So I finish this with a tender kiss.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a nice floral piece
    it is nice flowing
    Peace
    :angel1:
     
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    this was a tyte concept
    and a sweet message...
    much love for this piece
    one love
    khasm
     
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    another hot piece watz
     
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    Mzblkangel, glad you enjoyed the floral flow, thanks.
    Thankyou for letting me know you dug the concept, Khasm.
    Phenomenal, thanks so much for the thumbs up.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    every rose hold
    it's meaning of
    such unique way
    this was so so sweetly done
    and like a gem to treasure
    love it......
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a gem huh? Thankyou for humbling me this way, Rich.
     
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    most welcome a poet knows a gem when they see one
     
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    this was madd deep.....and I was feelin' it
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for letting me know, you're feeling this flow Foxi.
     
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