Black Poetry : A Few Words With My Heart

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  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heart; take notice
    No; not any more I won't let it happen
    Do away with the thought of love
    It only leads to deserted paths of...

    Crusted paradise,
    Crumbling into bits of fleeting bliss
    Swept aside with a broom of aching memories
    Diaries of dreadful inking

    Prints of fingers embedded into the pores of my skin
    Uprooting all dignity I have left
    Disappearing promised allegiance; and again
    Wretchedness stains my complexion

    Vanishing erections entrenching,
    Desolate tracks of affection
    Lying sound; crisscrossing my chest
    Once more I lie in a bed of lonesomeness

    Take heed to natures actions
    Ignore those flourishing flowers
    Brisk away those lazy lady bugs
    Diminish that congenial smile

    Don't think about it
    Don't think about falling again
    I won't let it happen
    You fool; stop wanting it

    No more bamboozled deceptions
    Insincere dialogues
    Reoccurring roles of he's the one
    Deceitful gentlemen characteristics

    No; not any more
    I'm shield and protected
    The day for hurt and pain nears
    Heart; I won't fail you again




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    Amberly da heart is masked
    by da joint of da soul
    many come and many go
    yet feel not nor crumble
    coz da mate awaits thee
    openly
    freely
    don't close da door
    see whats yet in stor
    for the heart to feel
    dis love a love
    is whats real

    nice vibe flow on !
     
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    This "girl" is DOPE! 1poetsought
     
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    That's right, that's right..."Heart; I won't fail you again" ...
    Just what I needed to see this morning.
    Thanks amberly.
     
  5. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx yall!!
     
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    I'm glad I took the time to read this one.
    I felt you
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amberly

    great flow great flow. glad i took the tyme to read




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  8. poeticdelight

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    now this was good

    feeling this flow

    keep writing

    pd

    :)
     
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    Amberly this was heartaching and deeply emotional. Your images are so vivid, and the pain and weariness drenches this piece. Your language is so expressive, and this was a beautiful read, yet so very, very sad. I can definitely feel this one. Peace.
     
  10. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx you guys for all the love you are showing me, I feel so at home here


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