Black Poetry : A Few Questions

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  1. Jelani_Dalmar

    Jelani_Dalmar Active Member MEMBER

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    It seems like I always have so much to say, but I never know where to start

    So I thought I'd ask you a few questions…a few questions from the heart.


    Do you feel the electricity I feel whenever you’re by my side…the attraction, desire, and wants…are these the same feelings that you hide?


    Do you know how much I crave to have you for just one night, one night all to myself? Sharing just the passion for one another…just us and not anyone else?

    Does your love canal moisten and that syrupy spot quiver from just the thought of my touch? From the look in my eyes can you tell I want you; know I need you so much?

    Can you feel me tenderly kissing your lips and slowly stroking your hair? With every soft lip embrace can you feel…feel how much I care?

    At this point could you relax and realize that everything will be fine? Because baby, love really does exist…it exists between your lips and mine.

    Can you see me slithering the tip of my tongue down the sides of your neck, because I know that’s your spot…Can you feel the strength between my legs, while I’m on top, am I now starting to make you hot?

    Can you see me freeing you from your earthly materialistic covering’s to expose your God given gorgeousness…is this what you have been waiting for…is this bliss?

    Can you imagine my hands gently massaging your bosoms as my tongue eagerly…yet…curiously follows your happy trail?…Does excitement build cause you know what’s at the end of that road, yet you hold back your yells?

    Once I reach that syrupy spot will your legs uncontrollably quiver, forcing you to grab the sheets causing your legs to squeeze…Dayum…this spot is so tasty…but baby… let a brotha breathe!

    Can you see yourself letting me up for air once you reached your climax, but you still know that there's more to come?...Can you see my strength entering you love, to complete us and make us one?

    Can you close your eyes and feel the pressure in your belly from me steadily moving in and out? Are you starting to understand now…what these question where all about?

    Would it bother you if I stopped in mid stroke to taste your love again, after all I always clean my plate? At this point are you questioning yourself; how much more can you possibly take?

    Entering you again this time with force, are you ready for this roller coaster ride? How do you want it baby from the front, the side or from behind?

    Does it even matter because I’m gonna do them all and then some…all until your done and I come…through for you as I’d plan too.

    Can you see me comforting you in my arms over these chain of events? Can my questions be answer once a few rules have been bent?

    Do you day dream about our secret love that we must keep on the low and outta sight? How can something be so wrong… feel… so… God… Dayum …right?

    Is this just another case when loves plays the fool and in the end, I am destined to get hurt?
    Or will we appreciate the feeling we share and some how make it work?

    I’m not sure what the future holds but these questions are just a start… So I thought I'd ask a few questions…a few questions from the heart.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow...we all get these questions
    in our minds this was nice posed
    just an Angel's view
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaa

    how can she not answer the question from da heart
    this was well pose'd and smoothly asked
    ya pen speaks of love and renew happy u here flowin
    speak on so all hear and answer the heart so dear
    tyteeeeeeeee!!!! :heart: :heart: surely she hear ya heart
     
  4. Jelani_Dalmar

    Jelani_Dalmar Active Member MEMBER

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    [Thanks for the love, I am so interested in other peoples work, you know what inspires people to write what they write. I like to mostly write short stories, but poetry, or as I normally say, My Thoughts on Paper, is something I like to do when it feels right.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sizzzzzlin' flo'

    :wave: Welcome to Destee's playgound


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel free to read others work and reply share your comments

    we have a forum for you stroll down from the main page
    we have a forum for short stories you will find many nice poet's
    and writters in there doing beautiful stories
    check it out .......like to read your stories :spin:
     
  7. Bluewater

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    wow
    this was very nice
    wonderful flow
    indeed
    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this:)
     
  9. angelicsage

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    I just got a call from heaven...that you were missing...

    translation...your work is heavenly...

    Whoa!....I was completely caught up on these questions...

    Loving your flows....Encore:spinstar:
     
  10. illwillthakid

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    Good **** my *****.
    I was feelin' ya style
    Keep doin' wat you do
    Peace
     
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