Black Poetry : a few juicy thrusts

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in a useless two seconds
    we cross each other's sight in a blare
    can't stare
    because last night was way too much to relive
    a sexual mistake
    we created the monster animosity in offspring
    forming a unity weaker than water
    the friendship left and phuckship set sail
    perfectly damaged a good thing
    and left emotions lying in the wings
    redeeming all those demons i released
    before i met u
    now is the wrong time and place
    for an awkward situation, so i continue pacin'
    onward
    downward
    backward
    to that place we both came from and didn't want to return
    the center of the soul
    where u left your bowl of emotionless lust
    and i misplaced my trust
    in a few juicy thrusts
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    where ya been ....nice to see ya flow as u break it down !
     
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    Very very nice there!
     
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    i hear what your saying for certain and...lovin the flow!
     
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    VERY well painted.... scribe on!

    alyce
     
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    ga boi.


    ...why they gotta be "juicy thrusts" ??! :lol:

    mmm mmm mmm! ummm... all that aside...
    it is wonderful to read you again. i liked
    this one... very much. don't stay gone so
    long next time! ****! (lol)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    classic..

    this belongs on top, permanently..
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot dayum

    hi-wa you done bust my head wide open with this one. oh yeah good to be all up in ya flow again.



    one
     
  9. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pree-shate all the vibes people. been gone on travel with the nine2five. i'm inchin back inthe middle. make way......

    b.e.z
    b.kul
    b.u.
    hw
     
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    I liked this.

    It drew me in, and though I knew where you might be going I stayed with it. / interesting.

    JAH Lives.
     
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