Black Poetry : A Fathers Love

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Fathers Love

    The sweetest thing I’ve ever seen
    Was the day that my seed was conceived
    I can’t explain
    How she makes me feel
    Except that she places joy into my heart
    And places tears into my eyes
    She makes me crazy in my head

    See she makes me happy, mad and sad
    But I can’t lie
    I love it when she calls me Dad
    And with her gorgeous brown eyes
    And that little cute *** smile
    She makes me weak

    I can’t explain it
    Cause at times
    She is just like me
    And her mom’s smiles full of joy
    When she sees my love for you
    Inside of me

    See little one
    You make my heart weak
    And my mental stronger
    Yeah I admit, that at times I am strict
    But love you nonetheless

    See, you are my blessing
    You are my righteousness
    And without you
    Not being near me
    I am miserable

    See, I miss your mischievous smile
    And that little twinkle in your eyes
    So, baby girl just remember
    That no matter what
    That Daddy, will always love you.

    [email protected] Manuel Hager


    This is dedicated to my daughter Alianna, who I wish I could spend more time with every day, every week, every month, and every year.

    No matter the time
    No matter the place
    If you need me
    I will always be there.

    Mannie
    Poet and Host of the Verbal High
    www.theverbalhigh.com
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Tight peace poet...

    This is a great piece because you're showing love to your family, your peoples. It's beautiful to witness. I hope you've read this to her. If not, you should. This will go a long way in helping her to understand men, in general.

    :thanks: for sharing this peace with us, the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    This piece just melts my heart. I always love it when I read about love from a male's perspective, it just reminds me of that tender side that you guys have. Wow...
     
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    Beatiful poem. Your daughters a lucky girl to have such a caaring father.
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had this poem framed for her and it hangs over her bed at her mothers house. Although her mother and I are not together anymore she appriciated it also. Thanks everyone.
     
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    Just as touching as when first I read this, beautiful write.
     
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    YOU MAY NEVER KNOW THE IMPACT

    YOU ARE CREATING A BEATIFUL WOMEN BY GIVING HER THIS POEM. ONE SHE WILL ALWAYS KNOW THE TRUE LOVE THAT COMES FROM A MAN AND SHE WILL BE LESS LIKELY TO FALL EASY PREY.TWO EVEN THOUGH YOU ARENT SPENDING AS MUCH TIME WITH HER SHE WILL ALWAYS KNOW THAT YOU WANTED TO DO AND BE MORE TO HER. SHE WONT FORGET THIS AS SHE GROWS. WISH MORE FATHERS SEPERATED FROM THEIR CHILDREN LET THEM KNOW HOW MUCH THEY REALLY DO LOVE THEM AND WANT TO BE NEAR THEM.
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful sentiment!

    How touching...you both are surely blessed 2 walk this journey 2gether! Nice 2 meet u!

    2fish
     
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    uppin the love of fathers
     
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    DAD's love return
     
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