Black Poetry : A Fairy...thatz what u r

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lloyd, Jul 26, 2004.

  1. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm walkin on the desert
    without you inside of me
    just tell me
    how could it be
    to love you even more than
    i love me
    tell me why i can't see
    without you infront of me
    why i can't feel
    without you being all i wanna feel
    if you were a flower
    i would have smelt you
    till my soul is filled with you
    if you were a kiss
    i would have tasted you
    till the end of time
    if i heared a song
    you'll be the beautiful rhyme
    if i was life you'll be it's prime
    i need you here
    with me
    so set me free
    or let me be
    would you stay?
    would you go?
    coz i wanna know
    is it for real or is it a flow
    i feel the wind blow
    i'm dancing with you
    so slow
    & your eyes is all i saw
    if you were a mountain
    i'll climb you to the peak
    & beside you i'll never break
    it's because of you
    i want to speak
    because of you
    i no more freak
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting and original....i liked it alot...
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was different:):) nice flow
     
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    Very Nice Lloyd. So angels do fly low. :wave:
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a sweet flow, Lloyd! I enjoyed it :spin:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte humble sweet scribe from deep inside
    love dis one !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so endearing, with a touch of mystique, which I just personally like. Keep these flows coming.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmm I see :) it was better than i hoped my brotha :) I do hope you find what you are looking for :grouphug:
     
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