Black Poetry : A Dream

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I dreamed of us last night

    Upon my pillow I envisioned
    Us as one. I saw the future
    That has yet to come.
    I dreamed of a place where
    No one and nothing else mattered
    But you and I and We.
    I dreamed of us last night
    Dancing on the moon beams
    And collecting starlight
    Of listening to winds whistle
    A lullaby.
    I dreamed of us last night
    In a vision that is so vivid
    It shook my soul and caused
    Me to release tears of joy and
    Sighs of satisfaction.
    I dreamed of us last night
    The way I dream of us every day.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I dreamth of us
    last night in da billows
    of our own place
    tracing moments of us
    just you and i
    in da mist of warmth
    i dreamth thee
    under the glisting starz
    as they kiss light upon
    us on da sandz of love
    at night i dreamth
    just like i do every day
    of u and me together.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our dreams intertwine and
    create that space in time
    where we can create just the right
    moment where you are my
    sun and I am your moon
    and in our galaxy we
    create an existence that only
    we can cherish.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    For there is no place
    then inside da dream
    of us cascading orbits
    upon da galaxy
    from da glow ur my starz
    as i your cosmos
    untouched we become
    unbound in our own
    existance
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    am i dreaming too

    felt like i was there too

    :bowdown:

     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da Street So'ja
    Dream on. Thanks for the love.
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    This wasn't "Thatgirl" but "Who's That Lady?!"

    You know how to so succinctly render the softest, sweetest song.

    And you and Rich just vibe and jibe together so well!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was such a pretty piece, romantically flowed poetess, with very nice flow backs from Brother Rich as well.
     
  9. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cherryblossom
    Thank you for the feedback. I always am happy when someone
    enjoys my work.
    watzinaname
    Thank you sis. And yes Rich and I seem to just connect.
     
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