Black Poetry : A DREAM?

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  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here's another one of my poems I would like to submit. It is called "A Dream?"

    I WENT TO SLEEP ON A RAINY, FRIDAY EVE
    BUT WAS AWAKENED WITH MISCHIEF UP MY SLEEVE
    BECAUSE I REALIZED I WANTED A TASTE OF YOU
    AND EARLIER I SENSED YOU SHARED THE SAME POINT OF VIEW.
    I DIDN'T WANT TO HEAR THE ANSWERING MACHINE.
    I WANTED YOU TO PICK UP ON THE FIRST RING.
    I WAS RELIEVED TO HEAR YOUR VOICE
    AS I TOLD YOU OF MY REQUEST BUT HEY, IT WAS YOUR CHOICE.
    WHEN I HEARD YOUR CAR PULL UP IN MY DRIVEWAY
    I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE ANYTHING I SAY
    AS YOU ENTERED WITH YOUR CHOCOLATE PHYSIQUE,
    IT WAS ON --**** THE MYSTIQUE.
    LUTHER NOR GERALD WILL BE PLAYING TONIGHT
    BECAUSE THE FREAK IN ME WAS ABOUT TO TAKE FLIGHT
    AS I PLAYED BUSTA'S "MAKE IT CLAP"
    AND YOU SLOWLY PULLED BACK THE FLAP
    OF MY **** TO VIEW ITS BEAUTY
    BEFORE YOU BEGAN YOUR TOUR OF DUTY.
    BY THIS TIME YOUR MUSCLE WAS ENGORGED
    AS EVERY INCH OF MY BODY YOU EXPLORED.
    AH, YEAH THE MOOD WAS SO RIGHT
    AS MY LIPS REMAINED CLENCHED AND TIGHT
    UNTIL YOU PLACED CREAM ON THEM AND THEN KNEELED
    TO WATCH THEM COME APART AS THE SWELLED.
    IT WAS THEN YOU TOOK A TASTE
    AND THE STROKE OF YOUR TONGUE MADE MY HEART RACE.
    FOR YOUR INTENTIONS WERE TO PLEASE ME
    AND WHO WAS I NOT TO LET THAT BE.
    WHEN THE FOREPLAY WAS OVER AND THROUGH
    YOU WERE READY TO PROCEED TO RECEIVE WHAT'S DUE
    AS I FELT JUICES FLOW DOWN MY LEG
    AND I CONTINUED TO PLEAD AND BEG.
    AS WE REACHED OUR CLIMAX TOGETHER,
    I WANTED MORE -- DEEPER AND WETTER
    BUT ALL WAS NOT AS IT IS CONSTRUED
    AS I WOKE FROM MY DREAM DRENCHED IN YOU.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet
    inside da dream keep scribing
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    flow on
     
  4. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dat was tight

    shocked!!!!! ur gifted what else is there to say
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow:)
     
  6. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoooaahh!!!

    Such a vivid dream & a brilliant scribe.

    Now I can put my tongue back in my mouth.
     
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