Black Poetry : A dream so sweet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lloyd, Jul 15, 2004.

  1. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    colors in the sky

    colors in my head

    love in my soul

    love in my heart

    there's nothing more to be said


    u were the thread that pulled my

    souls fantasy

    u were the light that guided me on

    the no hope day


    for what u gave me

    i don't know what to give it will be nothing in compare


    i hear my heart beats like

    an african drum


    now i hope for everyday to come

    u gave me happiness& i want to give u some


    i feel the world is mine

    so give me any sign


    are you for real coz

    because of u i began to heal


    i'll give u shelter from rain

    i'll protect u from pain

    i won't waste ur love in vain

    i'll give u so much to gain


    i'll hold u with my heart

    i'll make it a brand new start


    so tell me what to do coz i want you.
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *smiling*:)
    Ah Yes
    this is very sweet
    nice flow :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Very endearing with such lovely images, I liked the flow of this.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! ya flowing sweet
    with all this do take advantage as a PREMIUM MEMBER !
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was sooo sweeettt!!! :lol:
     
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    this captured the
    ~PURITY~ of
    love so effortlessly...

    wonderful peace poet!
     
  7. SensualReality

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    Lloyd wassup buddy....this was nice I likes it a lot keep it up. :shades:
     
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