Black Poetry : A Different World

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jun 13, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A DIFFERENT WORLD
    ***************************

    In a different world

    Outside my door

    Glory days,

    Are all but gone

    No more Ringo-Levio

    M-A-N-H-U-N-T is...

    The game of choice

    Everybody wants to play

    Anybody lacking game

    Occupying good to go ~

    Military runs the show

    Might decides who is right

    Good and evil black and white

    Proletariats on the run

    Wait for work unsung

    Where's Osama,

    Madman...

    Do you harbor Saddam

    What's next,

    What's in store?

    In a world outside my door



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte vibe on reality
    never know what's next in dis mixed world
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    might never makes right.
    felt this flow, Poet!

    I just put together the first pieces
    to my website that is to deal with
    these and so many issues. I'd like
    to invite you to check it out. I'd love
    some feedback and suggestions, and
    especially your views laid out.
    It's my hope and belief that this
    type of dialouge can only help us
    in our struggles to understand
    and even affect the world around us.
    So please check it out, before the
    sound of crickets there drives me crazy. lol
    Peace to ya!
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man..this was thoughtfull and good:) whgo knows what lies out there 1poet?
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Ipoetsought,

    Great flow!! I feel you all the way!! Intense read!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    outside of all our doors is a different world and sometimes it's not pretty thanks for putting it on us :)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's a different world outside my door,

    I'm so glad that you dropped in!
     
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    I like this one a lot. I like the way you wrote it. Good one!
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Queen-
     
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    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the flow and uniqueness of this piece. Great Job!
     
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