Black Poetry : >A Destination<

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TrU_sO_fReSh, Mar 21, 2006.

  1. TrU_sO_fReSh

    TrU_sO_fReSh Banned MEMBER

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    Hey Y'all.. well im new, My name is Nae ['TrU.NaE'] and dis an original piece by me.. :jump:

    How am i gonna make it?
    I got plans to get away from all this fake ****
    Wanna see my name in big lights
    "TrU.NaE", the headliner of the night
    Wanna get my words out to the street
    Want people to listen to what i say wen i speak
    Cause these words is TRU, na; these aint words of deceit
    I aint tryin tto say i got it hard, but it aint easy
    Livin life, walkin dis path in my feet
    People lookin down on me and sayin i wont make it
    I try not to let it get to me, It dont make me happy, but i fake it
    I express my emotions thru these words that i say
    Cause life truly aint promised tomorrow today.
    So we gotta make each day worth livin someway
    Got me singin like Trey 'I Just Gotta Make It' to fame
    Life aint easy, but some people dont find it hard
    They got everything handed to them on a silver platter, but i refuse that; thats just who i are
    So im on my way to the top, hopefully y'all wish me luck
    Or u could say some **** to put me down, one day it'll come around
    till then.. i just dont give a ****.
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo poet continue flowing.:love:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah no one can hold you down
    That was real tight I loved it
    Much Love Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house ya heart has found
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this flow some love

    Tyte drop look to read more of u soon and share poetic love
    i see ya pen is butta smooth...................welcome TrU NaE
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are well on your way, but prepare yourself for the worst.

    Love your spirit.
     
  6. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dis yo gurl G.A,heck naw my sistah i waz feelin dat, I MEAN DATZ HOW IM FEELIN TILL DIS DAY, i mean errbody alwayz got sum **** 2 say, and i be havin a bad day, but wat goes around will cum around on dem, so flo wit nonstop

    blackluv and bp