Black Poetry : A Deeper Penetration

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  1. JuicyLvsYa

    JuicyLvsYa Member MEMBER

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    Let's take this time
    and refresh our mind
    as we lay reflecting time

    Thinking how your lips brushed
    against my neck
    and your hands traveled south
    and my head turned
    and met your mouth
    we explored each other
    without an utter

    The touch of our fingers
    made the words we had to say
    embraced in each others passion
    as we lay
    for a moment we just layed there
    as I played with your chest hair
    you told me how good I smelled
    and I told you that was the scent
    of our passion filling the air
    you smiled and I smiled
    as we layed awhile

    We layed in bliss and reminisced
    about the love we made
    the times we prayed
    for better days
    the fights we had
    that made us sad
    knowing our hearts
    could never part
    the times we cried
    eased each others mind
    when a loved one died

    I love the way you stroke my face
    your fingers feel like lace
    we imbraced tighter
    holding each other
    for a moment
    without an utter

    We reminisced about our first date
    a meeting by faith
    that's the day I knew
    I loved you
    so warm, so gentle, so caring
    your words were over baring
    of stories told of your struggles
    for a moment
    we felt the urge to cuddle

    Do you remember the day
    we danced in the rain naked
    we danced through Gods tears
    erasing all our fears
    as He rinsed our souls
    until we felt whole
    we felt we needed a cleansing
    while we layed reminiscing

    Our souls touched
    the love we share so much
    from the first date
    we know it was faith
    reflecting back in time
    making love to each others mind
    as we lay
    without an utter
    for the duration
    of the night
    embraced
    in a deeper penetration

    Juicylv4u2
    (c) 3-7-01
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww dayum

    dis is sweet very sensual i love ya flow.
    peace
    goddess
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you had me hooked on every single line :thanks: for this one ...Its very very good !!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!
    tyte scribe
    dis was str8 awesomeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    flow head on .
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I LOVE IT!!!!!

    I agree with SwtT you had me HOOKED!
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was definitely coooooooooooooooooooooo! Great flow!
     
  7. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    getting a little warm in here, but Love's Favorite Son loves this right here!!!!
     
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