Black Poetry : ...a cypha...

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  1. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honey complexion endures perfection...peaceful smile blown by breeze effect those who beg it...hair of natural grain sun-kissed...waves to sea...
    Sand-swirls mark my pace...

    Reflection on schizophrenic visions of youth...prophesies offered by fortune cookie logic...laughter pure ringing bells of truth...sound emitted to cosmos reverb like magic...
    Only now to understand this place...

    Stylus fit to calloused finger as was meant...prepared to write again of life well spent...
    Questions once asked forgotten...

    Banded once and for all...radiant life and love combined...glimpse you through my sleepiness...halo sun surrounds your beaming...
    Your fragrance left on pillow under me...

    Child's laughter eases through floorboards below...vision of ponytail smiles and beauty etched with my eyes...
    Through love Nidja's arrived...

    Hand held by hand held...bound cells merge as one...your lungs fill...mine empty...thoughts combined paired perfect design...promises fulfilled through time...
    Old structures freed of mind...

    End searching..now sometimes thoughts fear death...physical seperation...divide...souls impacted 'til the end of time...
    Mysteries still driven by rhyme...

    Your pen speaks for my pen sublime...balance and harmony reached...cypha...now found complete.
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lili.


    i... am... Loving... this!! :)

    truthful-ly! & i started to pick out my favorite
    parts for you... but decided against it... it
    was divine reading in it's entirety, chile!! :)

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmm!! indeed dis one is sweet
     
  4. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    elayne. & $$RICH$$ ~ thank you !! it's just a little dream i have...lol
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definitely

    Diggin ya talent!!! know this...

    Reas
     
  6. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LiLi

    what was your motivation for the piece
    it is extremely deep and soul felt


    DSS
     
  8. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somone asked me once how i saw my life in 5-10 years. that's how i saw it...i suppsoe that i still do..lol..who knows!! :) thanks for checkin this and your response DSS...it's greatly appreciated!!
     
  9. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah... this is definitely hot LiLi!!!
    keep it goin!! -7:D
     
  10. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww wildflower7 i'm glad that you like this!! thank you!
     
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