Black Poetry : A Cyber Break....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, May 28, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Take my hand baby
    It's time for a cyber break...
    I've drawn you a bubble bath, step in
    No reason, just enjoy for goodness sake.
    I'll be back in a few.
    Submerge and let those bubbles seduce you.
    Now...
    Close your eyes, my caramel dream
    Those strawberries are almost as luscious
    as those lips, let me lick some of that cream.
    Wow...
    No, we're not doing that, yet.
    Its your pleasure I seek.
    Time to step into the next phase.
    Here's your towel, Dont worry, I won't peek...
    Much... :huh:
    Lay down on this table
    Let the warm oil ease your mind
    As I massage into every tense muscle
    this flow of the sensual kind.
    Your skin, shimmering in the candle light
    You exhale as my hands glide
    I realize that you never knew
    I had such a romantic side.
    Take my hand baby
    So, is that what you wear to bed?
    Be still my beating heart...
    Enough said... :blush:
    Just rest your weary head
    Listen to Jarreau scat and croon
    Somewhere there's heaven.
    How high the moon?
    Oh, you didn't know I could
    carry a tune? :grin:
    Well, there's much you don't know.
    Maybe you'll discover more someday.
    For now, close your eyes, while I caress
    your brow. The sand man is coming your way.
    Breathing deeply, yea, you're asleep.
    Nite nite baby
    Sweet dreams.....
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww, this was so tyte. I was definitely feelin' this. It was so original. :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u rocked him sweetly into
    a comfort zone
    if it was me my handz be
    on a roam twistin it as u
    moan bustin bubbles
    crashin da sheets
    no tyme to sleep

    well pose'd getting a bit hot i c
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Foxi for letting me know you were feeling the flow.
    Rich...I can get a bit warm, but usually not extreme. But this was just for him, to er um, relax, yea, that's right, that's the ticket. Scared of you and those naughty handz. Thanks for the luv on this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sistah
    but my handz won't be along
    so will my ???..........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, I thought you said those hands would be on a roam....Are you saying there's something else in those bubbles? Do tell....
     
  7. Fatima

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    :luvv: I Like :luvv:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know you liked this cyber break flow. Thanks Fatima.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa sis... :jawdrop:

    now that was some inspiration...

    you had some fire in your pen

    when you scribed this one...

    wow... :bowdown:
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It happens sage, occasionally....lol. Thanks for the props on this piece.
     
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