Black Poetry : A Cry For Help

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jun 24, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God give me the strength to make it through today
    Cause I'm losing this game and I can no longer play
    I've never been the type to just give it all up
    But shi*'s gotten hard and love is no longer enough
    At night I dream sweet dreams of my final goodbye
    Why aren't my wings made? I'm ready to fly
    God take me home and show me the light
    Return me to the ones I love, already in flight
    Nothing down here for me but death and pain
    Can't you see the Devil has me stuck in the rain?
    I've grown weak and tired through all my trials and tribulations
    It seems Satan has taken over your beautiful creation
    I throw my hands in the air and throw in my towel
    Cause in my heart I know it will only be worse tomorrow
    Death is slowly chiseling away at my heart
    Faith and Hope are still within me but are ripping apart
    What happened to your unconditional love and care?
    I'd take my own life but it's too **** hot down there
    God give me the strength to make it through today
    We need your help, I bow my head and pray
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am sure in my heart that he hears that prayer...Keep ya head up n don't fall down :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unto u thou shall hear
    he's alwayz by u so dear
    his word is bond
    if u hold faith and let his mighty hand
    swing in place
    prayer unto him is the key
    inside ya soul he fill it wit grace
    to continue life's crul race
    ya magical place is set above
    heavenly love awaits when tyme come
    but ya job here simply not done
    hold on to ya changing hand
    i am with u alwayz he say
    this true feel him everyday
    no need to fold nor bend
    he is the hope deep within
    pray and rise up to ya feet
    his love is a treat !!!!

    keep the faith & bond unto him forth his love is in u ....
    ya wingz will be
    flying low ......ya $$RICHNE$$ watching ova u
     
  4. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really felt this flow... sometimes life is a (BEEP!)... but stay in the game... expressing & easing the pain w/your flow... indeed they can help ya grow beyond those dark places... :)

    peace... and much luv
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautifully written poem...very heartfelt...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God never gives us more than we can bear...Gold without fire is never pure gold, No weapon against you will ever prosper...These and many more are his divine words...Stay strong, it may seem your losing the battle but the war is already won!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angelicsage.....Thank you for those beautiful words. I surely have been through the fire, 24kt right here!

    LovelyGoldenOne......thankyou for the compliment

    Nadia Binta....I have seen rare glimpses of the light thanks to my Lord and my poetry.

    SwtT.....You're words are always kind. Thanks for all the encouragement you have given me!

    $RICH$.........You're words are always kind and full of love. Thank you for all the love.
     
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