Black Poetry : A Conversation

[lilcherry76]

i was walking around,
doing the things i do.
then it just so happened,
that i bumped into you.
you said how are you doing,
without you--oh so bad.
but i answered great,
not knowing that i had.
you looked me in the eye and said,
are you okay?
only if you would hug me,
was what i wanted to say.
but instead i replied,
yeah--i'm holding on.
you said that's good
while i wondered for how long
then you said
i'll see you and waved good-bye,
i love you too i whispered,
as i turned around to cry.............

 

[queentswana]

Do our pride sometimes make us lose the very one we love? if :flamet: gets in the way whenever the two meet...then maybe you should stop wasteing precious time...always remember this: "HERE TODAY...GONE TOMORROW"
...and 'woulda, coulda, shoulda won't help then.
very nice piece...keep it coming

 

[watzinaname]

Emotions can be confusing, especially when we're not honest about our feelings. Not like we own a crystal ball or something. Feelin this flow.

 

[MzBlkAngel]

feeling this one
nice drop

 

[lilcherry76]

thank yawl for the love, i'm trying to learn, just trying to learn but sometimes it just like and all i can do is :uhoh: cuz i'm caught in the of