Black Poetry : A comfortable Situation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Apr 9, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stop, Stop, stop my mind clamors out as her melodius voice slowly hypnotized me!
    More more, the words that erupted as she somehow soothed me!

    Dazed! Entertained only by the sound of her voice, with a tone smooth
    Like a song,
    As conversated my curiousity couldn't help but to grow strong!

    How could it be, someone so unfamiliar could know an understand whats locked deep inside of me.
    Realize things only I should she!

    We talked an related to things that only I should know
    When put to the question,
    All she could say was "it shows"!

    She told me it showed that I was looking for the soulmate,
    She just might possibly be
    Insisting that I wanted more out of life than a tight skirt or tack head claiming to be all wrapped up only in me!

    Bequiled by her frankness, While left at a loss for word cause what she said was so true!
    I made excuse about trying to stay focused
    And followed with, the focal point being you!

    I've waited a many of days for someone to come and do what you've done
    Point out my problems
    Followed with the solution, hinting that the time has come!

    For me to experience things that most only sing about in a song
    The companionship Ive been missing might finally have come along

    Happiness and joy Ive recognized in a meer conversation
    Heart pounding, Love struck, relishing a comfortable situation!!!!


    Copyrighted By: L. Johnson All rights reserved
     
  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice piece
    I take it to describe a meeting of two deep souls
    That's always beautiful!
    I'M loving this poem poet




    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  3. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool Poem My Nizzle.
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right on, much appreciated

     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    Whoa!


    Inside I feel his pain
    With my love His wounds I completely heal
    Making him WHOLE again
    Soothing him with kind, gentle words
    Hypnotized by the very being of my existence
    Complete
    Fulfilled within
    Singing love's melody with our souls
    Together we were meant to be
    Upon an Alter I place this king
    For all to see his greatness
    My companion for ever more
    Strength when he's weak
    the joy in which he seeks
    That is what I'll be
    TheONE for the One
    because THEONE is the ONE for me

    Nita
    :heart:
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem really brings a serene, comfortable, feel to it, must be because you have command of those words. I like your flow with it Nita.
     
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