Black Poetry : A Clean Slate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Oct 27, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if i were your Irish Spring

    would your spring into my arms

    don't worry,

    there's no harm in cooling off.

    i've got plenty of spring water on my farm

    but last spring you had me alarmed

    when you ran away after i suggested that my wedding ring at the end of your arm

    could be the lucky charm

    you're missing



    love,

    howard
     
  2. Mark Wilson

    Mark Wilson Active Member MEMBER

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    speaking to Howardsu

    Howardtsu
    Doing right as you suggested;
    moving a sinner toward saint;
    a fornication partner into a wife
    is all admirable on your part.
    But some sinners don't see
    THE BENEFIT!!!
    DO THEY?
    I enjoyed seeing what you painted

    Thank You


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    Someones friend
    and
    no one's enemy
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up u took it from what was to what is
    in a togetherness tyte drop Howard
     
  4. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Clean

    Very nice poem, Howard.
     
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