Black Poetry : A CHILD'S PLACE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by INSPIRED, Dec 10, 2003.

  1. INSPIRED

    INSPIRED New Member MEMBER

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    from the prespective of a child of famine(in Africa)

    These devasting obstacles...are dilating my optics..and pressuring my hallow eye sockets...to hallucinate of carmal trees..chocolate covered leafs...and pepermint seeds...but the realities of these dry lips..and these empty hic-ups...got me on my kneessssssss...praying God pleaseeeeeeee...allow things to easeeeeeee. up...from these belly swells and back aches...my eyes have already rolleddddd...up..spitting out dirty..with the irony of having apples drawn on my shirt...

    first time posting..kinda nervous...ready now to inspire
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to do destee, u don't have to be nervous, not one bit,
    the family here shows love, so its all good,
    u are welcome here, i hope u like ur stay,

    :heart:
    -story :coffee:

    P.S...this poem was real, i enjoyed :read:ing it! :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome within destee.com
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee
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  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice inspiring introduction.

    Thank U 4 letting U be known.

    I feel Inspired.
     
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