Black Poetry : A Change of Heart

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MapleXtract, Jul 31, 2001.

  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [SIZE=huge]The day that I severed the emotional tight rope :uzi:
    and allowed my guard to plummet,
    I exhaled, :eek:
    and my :heart:, simultaneously, skipped a beat;
    whilst my first, second, and 'third' eyes
    sent 'Emergency Broadcasting System' signals-
    like shock waves-
    down to my, metaphoric, feet.
    Where personification, carelessly,
    let loose of the 'wheels'
    that, eventually, snatched control of my balance,
    causing me to fall
    `head over heels`
    and land in the midst
    of numerous fields
    of sheer devotion.
    Consequently,
    the water encasing my nonchalance
    had broken
    and my soul, systematically, gave birth
    to the notion
    that, for what its worth, my heaven on earth
    rests
    -enveloped in a blanket of emotion-
    just beyond the weeping willow...
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'MY MY MY!!!

    THIS WAS ON THE REAL AND A BOMB TOO
    MY HEART STILL RACING....LOVIN IT...:heart: :kiss:
    U BANG DEM KEYZ HEAR ME...........:toast:
     
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    as i made my way down the mountains...

    to the valley of milk and honey
    where fig trees were growing and rivers were running
    the skies were all sunny
    made my heartbeat all funny

    off in the distance, i saw the weeping willow
    and under hanging limbs, i saw a blanket full of emotions

    EMOTIONS, i said, let's take a little walk
    there's this sistah ova yonder
    who wants to have a little talk

    she's been sending emergency signals
    from a heart that's skipping beats
    body exhaling metaphors
    from the top of her head to the bottom of her feet

    she's trying to do a balancing act
    from a rope that's not secure
    all that's keeping her head held high
    is a heart both innocent and pure

    would you like to live with her
    ...provide stability to that one
    who will give you all you've ever wanted
    who will provide a smile when the day is done

    THANK YOU.

    now that your HEAVEN ON EARTH resides with you, again.
    can we get a smile?:)
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Haaaaaay Maple Xtract :wave:

    now it takes skill to write like this
    i don't care what nobody says

    i mean man
    i mean dang
    i mean go 'head Gurl!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lil Sister of Mine!...


    now who's got who taken notes??!!

    you flowed da hell outta dis one...
    & i ain't just sayin' that cause we related!! :)

    i loved it... loved it... LOVEDID it!!

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aiight Now Maple!!!!

    Bomb diggity here no doubt!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  7. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [SIZE=huge]The $RICHNE$$- You always know how to show a girlie some good lovin'...:lovestruc:[/SIZE]

    [SIZE=huge]Baller- Awww, I don't even have a come-back, witty enough for your come-back :lol:! Seriously, though, I appreciate you, immensely...:heart:[/SIZE]

    [COLOR=royal blue][SIZE=huge]Destee- You have no idea what an honor it is to be read by you. Thanx for feelin' my vibe on this one, 'mama bear'...:jumping::roll::D[/COLOR][/SIZE]

    [COLOR=sandy brown][SIZE=huge]Big Sis- You know I lub :heart: you right!?! There's nothin' better than receivin' love from my big sis...:D :D :D[/COLOR][/SIZE]

    [SIZE=huge]My Favoritest Flirt :lovestruc:- I can't help but to look forward to your replies. They put a couple of these: :D :D :D on my face...[/SIZE]

    [SIZE=large]Thanx, again fam.[/SIZE]
     
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