Black Poetry : A Broken Heart

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  1. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nobody likes a broken heart because it is a symbolization of a love that once was but is now no more.

    The pain is unstoppable nothing or no one can make it go away.
    You begin to do things you thought you would never do.
    You don’t want to eat because the food just want stay down.
    You don’t want to sleep because he’s in your dreams,
    You don’t want to talk because you might start to cry.
    Just when you’re at the point of no return you begin asking yourself
    “Why”

    Why is it me that’s in so much pain?
    Why is it me that has lost everything?
    Why is it me that is in such a mess?
    Why is it me that failed loves test?

    After you’ve asked all the why this? and why that? questions,
    You begin to realize that they have no answers.

    So now you’re back where you started from feeling the pain but carrying on.

    Healing and mending,
    Mending and healing,
    Every minute of the day.

    Wanting to love again but too scared to say.
    What if it’s not good?
    What if we fall apart?
    After all,

    Nobody and I mean nobody likes a broken heart.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes ya flow....
    i hear ya
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really likes this one...
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess it's true when they say: the heart can "take a licking and keep on ticking"...I sure as heck can witness that. I really like the way you delivered this piece, thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd flow on !
     
  6. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to Ireadastory

    Ireadastory , hearts crack, fracture, and rip into parts
    With age, we become heart surgeons, and fix hearts
    We start with cast, tourniquets, and apply some sutures
    Like Doctors we heal our selves and give others futures

    Seize the Day!
    Great Poem YOU have made!

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You

    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
  7. who~is~she

    who~is~she Active Member MEMBER

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    *hands ireadastory a needle and some thread*
    Sit down, let me show u how to fix it...

    nice drop yo.
     
  8. Ireadastory

    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for your comments they mean a lot to me and are greatly appreciated. I take my writing seriously, for me it is not a hobby. I hope to one day soon do the writing thing full time, but isn't that every writers dream?....hahahahaha Again, thank you all.
     
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