Khasm13 : a breath of fresh air....

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i came out the womb coughin
    now i'm suddenly lost in
    the reality that with each ticking second
    the time gets closer until i rest in my coffin
    or my remains are burnt to a crisp and spread with the dolphins
    almost halfway in my journey...and again i'm coughin
    at a society whose focus is on strickly creme like boston
    these pollutants fill my body often...
    like each time i breathe...
    too many materialistic fascists cause me to seethe
    as my body grows weaker like browning leaves...
    i asked the Lord please...
    please...
    please...
    grant me a boon of fresh crisp air so that i may once again breathe
    as i once inhaled deeply before you sent me to this world where i am forced to grieve...

    i have yet to breathe this fresh air that i'm sure exists in places heavenly...
    until that day comes...my love for you and your love for me...
    is all i have to keep my soul free...
     
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    *breathes*... Oh pure-hearted one... :blush: @ the aura of serenity which this piece emits:spinstar:

    :sand:

    :picture:
     
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    How bout...for old times sake...

    so here I am again…
    reaching to be breathin
    and all the while seethin
    from the lack of
    --Air--
    gasping to inhale for the sake of clarity
    but apparently
    all I’m finding is increasing disparity
    and I’m playing nic-nac-paddy-wack to make the green bounce back
    but the deeper I get the more I lack
    the more I step up the harder I get pulled back
    wishing that I could be
    extradited expeditiously
    if it meant that a Sistah could break free
    from the bondage the burdens the back breaking impossibilities
    cryin’
    “Lord please...
    please...
    please...”

    give me 5 seconds of exhale so that I can breathe
    so I tarry on this taxing, twisted, troublesome trail seeking my TRUE home
    keeping you on my mind to remind me, in spite of it all… I’m never alone
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now ...bruh this was breathless
     
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    We'll said Brother. I think we are all waiting to inhale, but until heaven comes we're all just holding our breathe with anticipation. Nice Words!
     
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    I love this.
    Very honest.
     
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    i realize

    we are so different
    yet the same poet

    .and again i'm coughin
    at a society whose focus is on strickly creme like boston
    these pollutants fill my body often...
    like each time i breathe...

    alot of the stuff you write is stuff that i think about

    and i was comtemplating a piece about "out of the womb"

    and you beat me to the punch

    this deep man

    it takes one to know one

    peace poet

    from a fan of yours
     
  8. Khasm13

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    thanks fam for the love on this piece...
    i don't write too many flows like this
    so it's nice to get a positive feedback when i do...
    i am truly humbled...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    I can relate to this piece, I too am waiting to "Ex-hale"
    nice drop Khasm...^5
     
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    tyte drop brother khas.............

    deep indeed!
     
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