Black Poetry : A bond Made By Something So Simple

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kasperr56, Jun 4, 2003.

  1. Kasperr56

    Kasperr56 Member MEMBER

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    Hold me
    Touch me
    Grab me
    Feel it
    You think I'm talking about some one
    I'm talking bout a basketball
    Let me hold you close to me
    Touch the tip of my fingers
    Let me grab you in my hands
    As I shoot all I want you to feel is the bottom of the net
    If I don't make this shot my dreams my life will feel over
    I put my life into this ball without my life will be destroyed
    To step on a court with nine other people I've never met before and instantly gain respect for them on this court their are no one individual working for them selves just ten people working to put the ball in the basket
    In an instant gain trust for someone I don't know to throw the ball up to an height I don't know if he can reach yet the trust I have in my team mate lets me throw that ball to him
    Its so funny how so many races can come together and play as one to get a simple basket yet if it wasn't for this little ball we would never know one another now I've made a bond with nine other people.
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Nice one! I liked the way you layed this down!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice...i'm lovin' the subject...the flow...everything...this was really good :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nIce flow ...I loved the way that you wrote it!!! (I'll at amit, that feel it ..had me think you were writing about sex) :x ha. :heart: tyte scribe
     
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