Black Poetry : ~~~~ A Blues for Papi... ~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jan 28, 2005.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Copyright ©2005 Sage~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BLUESSSSSSSSSSSS
    this was awesome wow ! sis all i can feel is the blue notes
    a melody divine as i'm lifted up awesome write sageeeeeeeeee!!
     
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    Whoa, sister, I can't believe the way you put this together. Languages tangles with images and speaking in textures........you have a way of taking the reader on your journey with you, inside your fantastic mind that experiences each and every one of the five senses to the fullest.

    Yeah, you're a soul scribe allright. And an extremely talented one, too. Much love, Sage.
     
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    Today I couldn't stop smilin
    Because your POST made me smile
    .I could ride your rhythm for an existence
    then I’d faithfully ask for another turn
    Existing in un-matched and flawless glory
    Is the story
    of the ascension-filled attraction
    So vibrant
    that the world over
    remains in awe
    of the beauty of SAGE
    Nurtured sacredly
    millenniums ago
    on the face of the Moon,
    the precise prettiness of
    Earth's precious daughter emerged
    with an elegance
    that complimented
    all of the Universe's magical wonders.
    Under
    the skin of the Earth's crust
    evolutions and revolutions of artistry and science
    Gave birth to bold brown bodies
    Blessed with beauty
    only the radiance of rainbows could parallel.
    I can only adore and cherish the beauty of SAGE.
    With skin of ceramic delicacy,
    I am forced to fit my eyes upon HER
    and admire her artistic accuracy
    that tackles the man in me
    so that I become a slave to her seduction.
    Crafted cheekbones ride high
    to the fancy of ovaled chin
    Equaling fluid architecture that has no end
    In-
    viting brown eyes complete this package
    of pleasurable profoundness
    ONLY apparent
    in the beauty of SAGE.
     
  5. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all I can say is TALENTED! Absolutely the best poem i've read in a long while! WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An intricately woven tapestry about the chasm of a man' heart. Such a well written piece, another slice of sage.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you took the words and made them come alive...your laid this very well enjoyed the read Sister as always .... Angel
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH my,my,my!
    What a MAN!!
    I want a man like that!!
    I love this!
     
  9. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One of the best articulated, metaphorical, compositions about love I have ever read.
     
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    bravo poet...this magnificent scribe left me speachless...wow

    *going back to read again*

    one love
    khasm
     
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