Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jan 28, 2005.
Copyright ©2005 Sage~Love
this was awesome wow ! sis all i can feel is the blue notes
a melody divine as i'm lifted up awesome write sageeeeeeeeee!!
Whoa, sister, I can't believe the way you put this together. Languages tangles with images and speaking in textures........you have a way of taking the reader on your journey with you, inside your fantastic mind that experiences each and every one of the five senses to the fullest.
Yeah, you're a soul scribe allright. And an extremely talented one, too. Much love, Sage.
Today I couldn't stop smilin
Because your POST made me smile
.I could ride your rhythm for an existence
then I’d faithfully ask for another turn
Existing in un-matched and flawless glory
Is the story
of the ascension-filled attraction
that the world over
remains in awe
of the beauty of SAGE
on the face of the Moon,
the precise prettiness of
Earth's precious daughter emerged
with an elegance
all of the Universe's magical wonders.
the skin of the Earth's crust
evolutions and revolutions of artistry and science
Gave birth to bold brown bodies
Blessed with beauty
only the radiance of rainbows could parallel.
I can only adore and cherish the beauty of SAGE.
With skin of ceramic delicacy,
I am forced to fit my eyes upon HER
and admire her artistic accuracy
that tackles the man in me
so that I become a slave to her seduction.
Crafted cheekbones ride high
to the fancy of ovaled chin
Equaling fluid architecture that has no end
viting brown eyes complete this package
of pleasurable profoundness
in the beauty of SAGE.
all I can say is TALENTED! Absolutely the best poem i've read in a long while! WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!
An intricately woven tapestry about the chasm of a man' heart. Such a well written piece, another slice of sage.
you took the words and made them come alive...your laid this very well enjoyed the read Sister as always .... Angel
What a MAN!!
I want a man like that!!
I love this!
One of the best articulated, metaphorical, compositions about love I have ever read.
bravo poet...this magnificent scribe left me speachless...wow
*going back to read again*
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