Black Poetry : A Blue Note

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UL820, Sep 28, 2001.

  1. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit battered
    by blue notes
    Lost inside
    myself
    Wordless
    Worried by
    this defining
    SILENCE
    As sound soars
    from writers
    As I ponder
    their craftings
    Marveling at
    the greatness
    of the GRIOTS
    in this camp
    Remembering
    when I wrote
    Before the Dam
    was stopped
    Before the
    River dried
    When my
    tears and joy
    both gave
    fluids to flow
    Before my
    Brain Attack
    When I often
    heard more than
    BLUE NOTES
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well

    expressed in the tune of blue notes:)
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i've never seen a blue note
    so red and yellow and bright

    thank you for this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    UL820

    the water is calm for a moment in time, but the river will flow once more as will the words from your heart to the paper..a nice piece..

    K
     
  5. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLUE NOTES

    RICH-DESTEE-KITANA
    Thanks for the read....
    Suffering thru a stroke,
    now called a Brain Attack
    renders one wordless
    Silences or makes
    understanding
    soul utterances
    impossible
    Strands the mental
    in yesterday
    Disconnecting
    the trinity....
    MIND-SOUL-PEN
    Leaves one
    PONDERING
    What I Call
    BLUE NOTES...
    like this 5hr.scribbling
    but thank you for sharing
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ul, i'm lovin' the flo of this blue note. very well written, i must say. thank you for sharin' it wit us all.



    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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