Black Poetry : A block to my vision

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  1. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These eyes of mine
    Paint a picture for themselves
    show a story through time one can tell
    Know's emotions and holds them so well
    in these eyez
    with trends of often getting lost in the past
    my mistakes and all of the bad that I've seen
    travelling in these eyes


    as dawn turns to night
    much like the thoughts in my mind
    finding myself hiding
    gazing without keeping it focused
    internalized confusion
    has me consumed
    as I get hype not realizing that I am hypnotized
    too blind to take notice
    drifting in the openness

    my only wish is to make it

    fear of failure
    but did I already
    to not really try
    Is denying chance
    especially
    when all things have been given

    Can you hear him in my fainted plee
    this destructive force exhaust my need

    LEFT with a lack of devotion
    so pron to being loyal to none
    Knowone I can trust
    memories flow in with a rushing fiercness
    of how ones naive innoscence can be disected
    stripped leaving one breathless

    Without his blessings I dry up
    empty
    and full of deceit
    so these tears cascade as my only release
    Sometimes music can be a route of escape
    venting the mass pollution from me

    so much expected
    somewhere hopefullness beams
    through these eyez,
    when one can realize.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh ! well said and done poet !
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel your flow on this one.
    thanx for sharing..
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent write. Fear isn't is option. :karate:
     
  5. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What honesty in your scrybe...Nicely written.

    :heart: moham
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice drop poet
    flow on
     
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