Black Poetry : A Blak Tie Affair (You Neva Thought It Would Be Like This)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 16, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello

    you have been invited to a blak tie affair
    please repondez s' il vous plait
    ASAP

    Remember: Bring your own BEG

    cause i'll be eating tonight /

    bring you / in a form of
    expectation anticipation and
    forthcumming celebration
    for this holiday you will
    create / a release day for your
    salutations of greeting me
    in a shudder encoded message /
    we'll call this day "FAINTASIA"

    ...............................

    I'm glad you could make it welcome
    to this blak tie affair where
    life will be a crystal stair
    and you will stare into the heart
    of a crystal ball and see the origins
    of an "Ooooooooooh" you haven't
    even proclaimed yet / lay~~~~~~~~here

    and listen to me in third person
    as if I don't know myself~~~~~~~~~~~~

    /he undressed her / the dexterity of
    his teeth impressed her / told her to
    lay down in the state God introduced
    her / to the world / he tied her hands &
    feet to the four posts with blak silk
    torn from her dress left just two days
    ago / to dry //////////it was soaked from
    the rain of a cumversation she and he had
    regarding her State of affairs / self-pleasing
    herself behind nightfall / so he made his
    hips fall that night / he made incisions
    with cotton collisions connecting his
    pelvic bone to hers to "Anytime,Anyplace"/
    rhythmically gifted was he teaching her dance
    steps she only thought existed on the tip
    of a romantics tongue / her body was sprung
    restrained from clutching the back of man blak
    and drawing her name on his chocolate sands
    he blew her mind across the room when he
    blew on her tremor measured body shaking
    9.9 on the hiptohers scale / he embedded
    buds in her / as he tasted her / and what was born
    of her? a smiling moan from epidermis to bone
    that called him daddy / as minor and major
    gave him a hug of sweetness and he tattooed
    his memory with her flavor /

    you lay relaxed body surface dispersed and
    rising like canibus smoke and I get high
    inhaling 'til you don't ride the air
    anymore and we become one..................

    thank you for coming to this blak tie affair.
    Ride safely.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don't think my eyes would ever get tired of reading you!

    OHHHH the way you tame the wild spirit of the words and with just the whip of your ink...they sit and obey your poetic command!!

    *obedience-schools*
     
  3. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fanning my face.... this was uh.. uh...like.. whoa
    Had ta take it there hu blak? Well go on witcha bad self...
    tyght!!

    8th!
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    well!... i don't think there's a woman on the page...
    make dat the planet... who could resist this invite! :)

    this was delicious...

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LIKE

    DIZZZAMMMMMM!! BLAKVERB SMOK'EM OUT!
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ride safely, huh?
    you never cease to amaze me. i was just listenin to anytime, anyplace on my lunch hour reminscin... you got it blak.
    -7
     
  7. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yumm...

    I've got a secret I'd like to share if you're interested in dessert! Meet me in 30...;)
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Smooth Blak, hella smooth!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The word that comes to mind is...

    ...delicious. Simply delicious, blak. I was, hungrily, soppin' up every word. Your sensuality is amazing... :lovestruc
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my peeps, i thank you as you all know i appreciate your words they keep me going.


    one love,blak
     
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