Black Poetry : a blak flow of verbs (remix)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, May 10, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    taste me before i'm ready
    my blindfolded surprise
    senses heightened with anticipation
    oral pleasures
    finger tips exploring various regions
    traversing up my calves
    caressing my thighs
    tongue taste valley hidden caves
    searching for the river that swells
    when volcanic eruptions inside
    cause me to quake
    aching for you to enter in
    drown you in my waters
    drink deeply
    float into my dark canal
    with your submarine
    release release release
    explode in me
    volcanically
    and i'll gladly meet you in
    spontaneous combustion
    every trip with you
    every trip
    is well worth the ride.
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dis hea is way toooo hot
    i am not sure that i am old enough to read dis hea
    i gona print and you can forward my calls
    ooooooow
    ooooooooow
    oooooooooooow
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The remix was nice...my wild poetical friend of seven flowers, keep writing it the way it needs to be written.

    one love,blak
     
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