Black Poetry : A Black Woman's Anthem

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  1. danakedpoetess

    danakedpoetess Member MEMBER

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    This piece is dedicated to every woman who had a lesson in their life which which eventually turned into a blessing by letting his *** exit out the door of your life... If you feel me please show some love and if not show some anyhow!!!!



    So you think you got my mind all confuse
    Because I keep you in my life and continue to be abuse.
    By your insecurities and lack of concern
    Baby, today is a new day and I will no longer be burn.
    You see regardless of how you treated me
    I carry out the things I set out to be.
    I have success, accomplishments; along with many other things,
    There is nothing compared to the wonderful joy my two sons bring?
    Yet, I still have this crave for something more
    After dealing with you, I’m wondering should I continue to explore.
    Should I be satisfied with what I have gained?
    No, this is not me; I must continue to maintain
    My dreams and goals which remains UN-fulfill
    I almost forgot whom I am the woman with sex appeal.
    Oh, I am not saying I do not have any flaws
    Regardless of what you think, I am still making the calls
    Of my life and with whom I decide to share it with
    I am SINGLE, but by choice which is not a myth.
    I lived the committed life without the ring
    Bringing me heartache along with a sad song to sing.
    I was faithful doing what I thought was right
    Giving you my all including MY good love at night.
    I now realize I had a man for the wrong reasons
    Putting up with unnecessary drama throughout the seasons.
    It took time to recognize that leaving you was the best thing to do
    Yes, I did learn, mature, and is brand-new
    I now know who I am. Would you like to know to?
    Maybe this will help others omit the bull**** I have been through.
    In the past, I considered myself over-rated
    I am a Black woman who's feared, misunderstood, or simply tolerated
    I did not receive the respect I deserve so much
    I fell into in the arms of lust with a single touch
    Thank God, somebody was thinking and praying for me
    Because I am no longer blind and can so much see
    Through the lies and the games that men love to play
    Take that **** somewhere else; as I said, this is a brand new day.
    At one time, I was lost and could not tell wants from needs
    Sister girl has risen and threw away those seeds
    I no longer need YOU as my addiction
    I am sick of the pressures and the friction
    That comes along with unstable relations
    This is the black woman’s anthem you need to flip that station.
    I am focusing more upon things that revolve around me.
    I only have one life to live so I will live while I am free.
     
  2. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    danakedpoetess, You did a wonderful job to bring forth your gut reactions and put everything within your world in its proper place. Always keep your focus within your realm and what you need to do in order to be yourself. In the end the your true king will acknowledge your real beauty and then life will be bliss.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tyte scribe...
    keep da pen
    on red alert...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my felt dis ya pen jumpin and bringing da heat
    flow on speak to my mental
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi:wave:
    nice drop
    looking forward
    to reading more
    Peace
     
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