Black Poetry : A Black Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miss-no-love, Mar 1, 2005.

  1. miss-no-love

    miss-no-love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A BLACK MAN


    Looking at the world and seen how it changed.
    Thinking, wondering why me, a black man is always to blame.
    Struggling, trying to get by on the streets, felling like the white man is always trying to take something from me.
    Don't regret anything I did to keep me and my family alive, feel like I had to keep the white man happy to stay alive.
    I do have one thing and that's my dignity, that's one thing I got nobody can take from me.



    Again yall this ya gurl miss-no-love. This is my second poem I wrote since the first one I did "Untitled". Tell me what yall think.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this....
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte write of a black man story flow on!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The struggles that a Black man has to go through, flow on with it, many will understand and appreciate.
     
  5. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back!

    Sorry I missed this one. This was tyte.
    Thanks for sharing.
     
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