Black Poetry : A Black Man in Love...A Sage And Watz Collabo Thang

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 2, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WATZ
    A black man in love...
    is a beautiful thing.
    He can make your soul cry,
    while forcing your heart to sing
    He coyly offers his essence
    in everything
    No other man can capture
    the spirit he can bring.
    An Exotic
    EROTIC
    tiger lily
    With petals of all mocha hues
    makes me sigh with a breathless rush
    How could any sister ever refuse
    His determined walk
    His poetic talk
    His confident way of emoting
    When I hear him speak
    My entire aura gets weak
    To his Nubian universe I am devoting...
    An endless river of blissful emotion
    c~a~s~c~a~d~i~n~g
    into an eternal ocean of devotion.
    His demeanor exudes a gentle breeze
    that floats into a whirlwind of romance
    holding a heart tenderly, yet securely.
    Debonair, yes,
    by divine creation,
    not by happenstance
    For a black man in love,
    is a beautiful thing.


    SAGE

    When a black man is in love
    The sun arises as his command
    Within his palms are distant lands
    The world is at peace & the galaxies breathe
    All divine creatures, bow at his feet
    A Black Man in Love …
    is a beautiful thing
    He envisions rings…
    Upon dove like wings
    Harmonic truth and majesty
    Drip down…like
    Honey, Sugar Cane, Molasses…
    and Cotton Candy Kisses
    Twisted within his locks of
    cottony, onyx, heritage
    …He *G*L*O*W*S* and he knows
    He Shines…so…that Orange Moons
    are paled by comparison…
    Oceans RISE when he breathes
    And Love is humbled…when he speaks
    Amidst his voice, ebony croons & peaks
    Like unsung lyrics…of a Coltrane melody
    He's "Sentimental"…like that
    For when a Black Man is in Love
    He's Fire…He's Ice…
    He's Wind…He's Rain
    He's DIVINE…and it's a beautiful thing
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, this was the bomb digidy. I don't know what it's like to have a black man in love but if it's like what it is in this poem I just can't wait. :huh: This poem was tyte and props are given to the both of you. :grouphug: :kiss:
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold up wait a minute did these women break it down and spin it?
    I like this right chere got me talkin' like I'm on da riva massa ain't gone like this:lol:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyte drop ...........one lucky black man
    to bring this kinda sweetness
    one day i too hope to be like dis man
    flow on u two ......................................
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much Foxi from both of us. Just giving out props to what is ideal.
    Sensualreality, hold it down now, we don't want anyone gettin riled up, lol. Thanks for diggin the poetic vibe we dropped.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something we all can strive toward Rich. Poetic flows are so wonderful in that you can mold them any way you want to. Thank you for your kind words, we had fun with this.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Watz and Sage...

    nice...very nice. :D

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with us.

    :toast:
     
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    Sage and Watz,

    You two paint such a beautiful picture. Made me walk right through it. :grouphug: :grouphug: This was so tight...
     
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    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful :spinstar:
    beautifully written

    Monad.poetress
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmm delicious. You all inspired me greatly. Loving this
     
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