Black Poetry : A Black and a poem( dedicated to j'hiah)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by twision, Mar 25, 2004.

  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lighters out
    Books open.......
    You speak while I puff
    Flowing through words and testaments to your brilliance
    In awe I inhale
    Feeling the buzz from the mind altering thoughts of a living legend
    Oh yeah and the Black too :lol:
    I compliment you, yet the words do me no justice
    You point to my book
    I open
    I Read
    I Inhale
    I Exhale
    We close the books and converse
    About life, God, girls, and plans (not neccesarily in that order)
    Ahhhhh...the good old days

    But life stepped in
    Changing
    Re arranging
    Separating the spiritually conjoined twins
    Etching different paths for them
    Showing them new people to inspire and love
    But I must admit
    On days like this I miss you
    So with Black 'n' Mild in hand
    I inhale
    And write one for you!

    Much love man!!!!!!!




    :yo: :yo: :yo: :yo: :yo: ( duhhh huhhhh!) :laugh:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice...:)
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man, in the end you almost had me dying on this floor :laugh: cuz l know
    what that means.

    anyway l see waaayy over there- handling it..
    now you know it will be on- once again
    :yo: :yo: :yo:
    *need a 40oz. smilie*
    :lol:

    twision and jh a.k the town drunks :lol:

    much love.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smh :lol: I dont know whether to laugh or get yall some help :lol:
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya speaking loud and i smile again
     
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    :) feeling this :laugh:
    poetic conversation'
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This write had a "just chillin" vibe to it, like we were given a glimpse into a friendship. Smooth scribe.
     
  8. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're right Watz( glad you peeped that)
    A glimpse into the best friendship I ever had
    J'hiah is my brother and poetic, flowetic twin

    Thanks for the love
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    lol...right...
    this was supa tyte...
    i write with black and milds too....word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinn: nice i like it
     
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