Black Poetry : a big girls daddy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jun 16, 2003.

  1. MORE

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    i remember when
    u used to hold me
    and carry me
    and sing to me

    now i do those things
    for you...

    and when u'd scare the
    boogie man away
    and throw me cheeseburgers
    in the middle of the day

    and let me play
    with your tools when
    u built my dog's house
    in the summer time.

    i remember fallin asleep
    and how u'd carry me
    up the stairs so steep
    and i felt like a queen..

    you did all those things
    and more to make me happy
    and now its my turn, daddy.

    cause now u can't
    speak or walk
    but i know u u love me
    cause u smile, when u see me

    just like u did
    when i was a baby.
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

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    i like this... so appropriate w/Father's Day just passing... if you shared this w/him... i'm sure you made his heart smile! :)...

    peace
     
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    Words every Dad yearns to hear. Very Nice, MORE-
     
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    tyte scribe sistah
    dad's little girl indeed
     
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    in this day and time where dads are being dissed, this comes off refreshing and rewarding.

    peace..
     
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    Absolutely touched by the love of this piece!!!!
    may God bless you and you father!!!
    Peace to ya, Poet!
     
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    great poem
     
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    Hi MORE,

    This is a very beautiful and touching poem. It tugs at my heart.

    His smile means he loves you and is thankful to have you in his life.

    i am glad you shared this one!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    this is so original and beautiful I luv this it means so much becuase in more ways then one I can relate to your feelins just wanted to send some luv round your way so until next time

    keep flowin
     
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