Quiet Poetry Lounge : A Better Way To Speak

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Phenomenon, Aug 11, 2008.

  1. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Me, myself and I
    Matured into you, yourself, and yours
    Once you decided to love me

    Me, myself and I
    Matured into we, us, and ours
    The moment I decided to love you back

    Thank you for teaching me
    A better way to speak
    A better way to love
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OMG...you are poeticly killn me this evening.
    Talk about BEAUTIFUL....."A Better Way to Speak"
    You make it hard for a sista to say anything....
    You say it all so WONDERFULLY!!!!!


    Much Luv
     
  3. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4everluv, you know i got luv fa u 4ever. You remind me of me and my reactions when i read something that hits home and I'm like drop-jawwed at what I've read. So it's humbling that you find my words to have that affect on you. Always appreciate you stoppin by and feelin me!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wit out a doubt this was on point
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow i need a better way to speak to describe the phenomenon that is your lyrical talent. Poetically turned out as usual
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes indeed, when we truly love it's no longer all about me, bull's eye poet!
     
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