Black Poetry : A Beautiful Thought

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, Jul 3, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beautiful mind
    Begets a beautiful body
    Begets a beautiful soul
    Begets a beautiful heart
    Begets a beautiful love
    Can you love me
    Beautifully?
    Can you embrace my heart
    With beautiful words
    Whispered oh so beautifully in my ear canal
    Sending a rush of beautiful warmth
    Through out my blood line
    Suffusing my beautiful body
    With heat and passion and beautiful fire
    Can you hold me close in your beautiful arms
    And protect me from the cold dark world
    That wants to destroy my beautiful heart
    Can you love me
    Beautifully?
    Can you fulfill my beautiful
    Desires
    Night after beautiful night
    Suspended in our own
    Beautiful reality
    Enclosed within a beautiful dream
    Can you love me
    Beautifully
    A beautiful mind
    Begets a beautiful body
    Begets a beautiful soul
    Begets a beautiful heart
    Begets a beautiful love
    I ask this question with a beautiful voice
    Can you love me beautifully?

    Natasha :heart:
     
  2. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply beautiful. I sincerely hope you have a someone to share all of this with. Like I said before, you do this well.

    JAH Love.
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She sho do...she sho do.
    I love your 'warm' phrases in this poem. It's 'beautifully'...tight. :)
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha

    Beautiful






    One
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yall are too sweet

    tapping into my inner peace
    glad that you guys are feeling me
     
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