Black Poetry : A Beach Scene (Short Story)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Feb 5, 2002.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Summer night
    Hands clasped
    Deviating steps
    Wandering hearts.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Joyce

    the way u bring it is too sweet.......sistah i be lovin ya flow
    u done took me by storm ......u know i'm a fan of ur's:D
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    joyce...i see this picture you've painted heyah on canvas. have i told you how enjoyable your haikus are??? well, they truly are.
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich...that's why you are so special. You know how to make me feel (even tho I ain't) like I'm the only one. Thank for the read my brotha.

    Ms. Listerscribin: I am always pleased that you enjoy my humble works. I don't take this for granted at all my sistah...thank you much. This poem in particular is not by no means, a haiku. This is another style (my own) I call deuced poetry. I place only two words on each line in stanzas of four lines. Sometimes I write only one stanza of deuced poetry...at other times more than one stanza. Thanks for the read, glad you enjoyed.
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well, i'm lovin' it!
     
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    title caught me. had to pull it up :cool:
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well sistah, then "deuced" it is!! :lol:
    Whateva Queen Joyce calls it, it's still tyte!

    :) N2
     
  8. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Poets

    Glad yall be liking dis!!!
     
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