Black Poetry : A Bad Dream

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mawelulu1Luv, Aug 5, 2004.

  1. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mahogany Ecstasy
    Buried in white darkness

    Haunted with perpetual nightmares that witness
    the brutal murder of peace

    Alien alabaster reptiles
    looking & talking like angels
    laugh & smile

    while spitting venom
    into the souls
    of aboriginal hue-men

    Paralyzing spirit
    Poisoning thought
    Constricting creativity

    Executing homicidal orgies of tyranny
    Distorting history
    Perverting reality

    Ripping the fabric of time & space with blasphemy

    Slaughtering the fathers

    & the mother of civilization
    is slandered as a canine

    as the eyes of her children
    are plucked from their heads

    Fetuses choose death within the womb
    to avoid the tragedy of living

    & Generations of genocide
    litter the streets with the dead


    But—
    even as lust runs rampart
    & greed is fair seeming
    with fratricide as the order of the day

    A Peoples blind rage will yet—stay

    Awaiting the moment of truth
    Strength returns to parents
    & future to the youth

    Ebony essence flows
    the force of the universe surges in our souls

    With the power of love
    bad blood
    is run clean

    & devils implode

    As We Rise from this pale hideous dream






    Copywritten @ 2004 Mawelulu Onwuku Amun-Ra
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte drop u always bring great scribing to the page love it
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet your are...

    ~ AMAZING ~

    You never dissapoint...
    I can't begin to tell you, how I look forward to the journeys your poetry takes me on.../ journeys of self reflection into the depths of my awareness and suddenly....I am awakened and Inspired...to continue on because your words have told me that I shall again Rise...

    I shall again Rise through the words of Mawelulu1Luv the Revolutionary Poet :bowdown:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such powerful, prideful words, laced in potent images. Flow on with this, your words speak volumes.
     
  5. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reply to Mawelulu1luv

    Mawelulu1Luv, In a sea of papers scribed and scribbled
    This one blows in my face, its so profound upon it I nibbled
    This jewel I will feast upon its light for eternity
    In heaven I will proclaim your name among my fraternity


    Great poem you have made
    Please go and seize the day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nive drop

    Feeling ya style poet and your flavor!
    Scribe on my brother!
     
  7. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankz one & all 4D Luv & Ncouragement
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brotha one of these days you have to bless us LIVE on the mic :look:

    it would be memorable indeed :bowdown:
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my...the intensity of every line...on my! Your use of metaphors are worthy of thunderous applaud. Thank you for sharing with me.

    ~j
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    knowledge so engulfs your words bruh. tyte flow - know this. k
     
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