Black Poetry : A-B-C OF US

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A-B-C OF US...

    A lways know you're dealing with a divine Queen,
    B ecause the "heart" in me...others never seen.
    C ount the ways I make love to you at night,
    D on't forget about the times we faked a fight.
    E ven tho it lasted only for awhile,
    F orever graceful that it ends up with a smile.
    G ive and take...is what our loves about,
    H aving crazy sex, to turn each other out.
    I have no doubt about what the future holds,
    J ust remember love...that I'm your only Gold.
    K iss me tenderly...make me beg for more,
    L ove the "Queen" in me...and freak me like before.
    M old my body parts to fit your every need,
    N ext time we make love, hurt me till I bleed.
    O ur love only can, stand the test of time,
    P ut out these flames...bring your body next to mines.
    Q uite as it's kept, I wanna sex you here and now,
    R un in it like you could...and I swear I'll take a bow.
    S aturate me down, and pour oil all on my bod,
    T alk dirty in my ear, about the way you push your rod.
    U nder the influence...so just wait till I'm sober,
    V igorate, meditate, ...then lick me all over,
    W ork with the main parts, like a 4 leaf clover.
    X -cuse my language, I'm not talking with sense,
    Y ou rocked me so long, now my whole world is dense.
    Z oom went the strings of my heart when you stopped,
    :spinstar: **** I ran out of letters...before the last drop. :spinstar:
     
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    Sister Queen!, I been reading your
    poetry and you are on fire! :hot:
    Dang Sis! :hammer: Your creativity
    is kicking down doors! :hot: :hot: :hot:
     
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    very unique style and tyte display of art here in letters of meanings
     
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    love the creativity
    likes this poem..your on fire
    nicely done....Angel
     
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    Purplemoons...
    I feel very honored and flattered that you took the time to say the sweetess things to me and show luv and support, thanks a lot.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The goodness in you...will soon bring out the goodness in "others" ...thanks
     
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    Angel, I'm going to make sure Keita give you back your other wing :D ...
    thanks a lot for the props and luv.
     
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    Aww! Thank you sister Queen!
    The pleasure of reading your
    scribes have been phenominal!
    The honor is mines!
    :thanks: for sharing your
    soul felt talent!
     
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    Wow...All the way from A to Z. This was masterful, the way you just strung everything together, and on the spicy side too...:) I enjoyed reading this.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for the luv Watz, it meant a lot.So glad you liked it.