Black Poetry : 90 Degrees

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UbZoRbShUn, Jul 11, 2001.

  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I sit 90 degrees
    purrPENdycular
    beneath weeping willow
    trees contemplating
    my existence
    shaded and comforted
    by the knowledge that
    I'm just passing through
    life in chronologial order
    disarrayed the beginin
    be the end the end be the
    beginin or so it goes
    sippin on Mimosa's burnin
    Triple Amber blazin' hemp
    to get ma mynd rite careful
    not to break rotation 90 degrees
    underneath these willow trees
    livin and just being



    I’m rotatin' on a
    90 degree angle
    in need of a V8
    feelin like I’m walkin’
    through life sidewayz
    these days
    tryin to evade stress
    and get muh mind right
    cause I can't seem
    to persuade
    my mind to write
    is it always night?
    seems all the weeping willows
    are reaching for the sky
    wait
    I’m standin' upside down
    inside my mind?!?
    tryin to figure out
    what the purpose is
    for this air
    I’m livin and just being
    cause being just and livin
    ain't gettin me nowhere...


    ©UbZoRbShUn and Reason Originals 2001
    all rights reserved
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...
    naw, it ain't always night.
    here's a V-8...
    drink slow.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    UbZo

    absolutely loved this work
    because it's something i feel all the time

    on watch for your next masterpiece


    Peace
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preciate yo luv. Reas and I was like dang that just flowed like wata baby. I feel you on this too.


    One
     
  5. Tyrone

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    Stimulating

    my mental, Ms. Zorbshun. And I just wanna thank ya.


    Ty
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorbi...


    i have to agree... dis one flowed like wata!! :)

    but then again... errythang you do is done well!
    (& i ain't just saying dat cause you my sister!!)

    One.
    Sunny~
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad yor mental was stroked Ty...
     
  8. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wildflower...

    Can you bake? if so make me a pineapple upside down cake but make mines upside right... are you sure it's not alwayz night?

    Drinkin my V8 slowly...
    Reas
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm

    I don't know Reas... what you smokin ova dere bru, but share with the group....:D I feel you
     
  10. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw, it ain't always night...
    though i sometimes wonder mahself
    and yes i bake...
    but you gotta share your
    upside right cake!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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