Quiet Poetry Lounge : 8ever

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jun 19, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We sweat a fragrance that
    Jasmine Frankensense or
    lavendar roses could not
    connect to compose

    and laughed at the joy the moon
    shone down on us as we recouped
    from the journey where stars are born
    under an undone tomorrow

    into the depths of discovery
    you me again every time
    is new now and "eightever"
    two times past "for" because
    we dreamed blak pearls and
    amethyst in a liquid form getting
    us intoxicated as if we drank each other
    whole at the same time between
    6 and 9 (maybe it was ate)

    time doesn't exist in the land of
    serene where the wind blows still
    shifting the clouds into poses of
    kaliedoscopic arrays of pleasure
    inviting us.....again....into..............
    "eightever"

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U and I 8ever...

    my...my...my...:rolleyes:

    blakdini...you have taken my mental
    to another level of
    serenity/sensuality

    I love this:

    "into the depths of discovery
    you me again every time
    is new now and "eightever"
    two times past "for"..."

    you keep me
    I N T O X I C A T E D off your
    liquid flowetry!

    ~sitting here in a drunken mental stupor~:eek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    DIZZZZZAMMMMM!!

    U STR8 OFF DA CHAIN VERB
    MAN O' MAN..
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww! The sweet smell of lavender

    One of my favorite.

    Cocobutterscreammmmmm
    (((((BRAVO VERB!))))) :toast:
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    C L E V E R piece~!!
     
  6. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This Piece truly swept me away

    and into each line of your Blakverb-atim!!!
    Luvin this !
    Jyntl
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you never cease to water me
    and quench my thirst when
    my petals get a little dry...
    thank you.
    -7 :spinstar: