Black Poetry : 85 degrees

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 23, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She said I must be cut from a divine fabric
    because when she was done wiping her body's
    desires with my physical verbs she said
    "God whispered that I was the one"
    and he seperated the clouds so she
    could see my abstract image on the sun rays
    reaching out to her with a touch of
    85 degrees...

    extinguishing rain teardrops before they
    landed upon her causing her soils to bleed pain
    I became her vestibule so she can take
    shelter in my soul and dry her eyes with
    the whole...of me...as arcane as it
    may seem she understands that I am the
    prophetic one who

    sees when shes not looking not
    needing to turn her head cause I've
    got her back I am the one that
    stitches her dark days into shade
    when she wants to be cool, or if not...
    she knows the breeze from my lungs
    will do

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Damnit....Blak~

    Take ME NOW!!!!!!!!!
    It's hot and I needz your shade :angel1: :devil:
    foreva, foreva eva foreva eva???!
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    At N2...

    ...girl I feel you, on that thought :laugh:. Truly, though, blak, you stay keepin' me mesmerized...
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2 and MapleX,

    my poetic queens, is it getting hot in here or is it me? Some of us have been quite prolific. I'm having trouble keeping up. But ya'll watch out "the perfect piece" is coming. thanks for the love.

    one,blak
     
  5. Destee

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    BlakVerb ... wow ...
    yeah rite, is it hot up in here???!!
    is today 04/23/01 ???
    you know exactly what your flow does to us!

    *fann'n*

    please don't stop!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    on fiyah...

    this is some record breakin hot blak!!!! on fiyah here in the B-Lo!!:)

    *pullin out the AC*
     
  7. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the first brother to reply -

    No doubt , no doubt
    100% intelligent black child - GO 'HEAD BOY !!!!!

    *takin notes *

    wordbond, this is what many want and
    few can find .
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    this is 85 degrees of pure pleasure to read...

    ...& visualize. you continue to amaze... ALWAYS.

    OneLuv...
    Sunshyne~
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet

    I cannot express my appreciation enough, for your poetiK verve!

    thank you will HAVE to suffice! :)

    a
     
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