Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, May 30, 2002.
i enjoyed every line
Well done! Beautifully written...
Very well done and thought provoking , passionate poem.
Keep on scribing and vibing!
BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
I love your work! It's been too long since I've sipped from your fountain....the entire "peace" captures so many vivid images in my mind's eye...culminating to one final, beautiful truth:
"pyramids find circles
and private locks give in
to whispered galaxies
we find greetings
in yellow mornings; again."
This spoke volumes to my soul. And I thank you.
we've met before is deep gypsyman, for a moment I thought I'd layed in that very spot you spoke of. maybe I did? maybe I did'nt ? who's to say? any way you keep growing on this journey only those who see know the truth.
very well written
and I enjoyed the read
methaphorically AWESOME! Metaphors...take me away.
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