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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, May 30, 2002.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. poeticdelight

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    Beautiful Work!

    i enjoyed every line :)

    pd
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well done! Beautifully written...

    Very well done and thought provoking , passionate poem.
    Keep on scribing and vibing!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love your work! It's been too long since I've sipped from your fountain....the entire "peace" captures so many vivid images in my mind's eye...culminating to one final, beautiful truth:

    "pyramids find circles
    and private locks give in
    to whispered galaxies
    we find greetings
    in yellow mornings; again."


    This spoke volumes to my soul. And I thank you.

    Alyce
     
  5. scandalis

    scandalis New Member MEMBER

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    we've met before is deep gypsyman, for a moment I thought I'd layed in that very spot you spoke of. maybe I did? maybe I did'nt ? who's to say? any way you keep growing on this journey only those who see know the truth.
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well written
    and I enjoyed the read
     
  7. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    methaphorically AWESOME! :) Metaphors...take me away.
     
  8. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo !!!
     
  9. j'hiah

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    awesome!!

    each stanza..

    nfinite,
    jh.