Black Poetry : 8 thousand ways to pleasure

blakverb

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holding myself above you
sweat jumping from the cliffs
of my desires to their deaths
implanting themselves into your
soils to be reborn rebirthed and
resuscitated as a moan from
deep within you /

/ I watch the sheets bulge between
your fingers that clutch them as if they
can keep you from hovering outside of yourself
to view a moment of release /

I watch in envy because the man's orgasm
is so primitive...pump pump pump...
guussssssh...there it is, a salty gism on your
walls that drains to the back of your leg
and is reborn as a not so stubborn stain
on the sheets...it doesn't even have the fortitude
to stick around

the female orgasm is like poetry in motion
(but so far beyond that tired cliche')
from what i see it's like walking barefoot through
morning grass and letting the birth of a new day
shape your existence for the next 24 hours
or innocent toddler crayon markings on a white wall
...unadulterated beauty

that quick breath you take before the tightening of
muscles / the electricity of choppy moans before the
one that eclipses the worlds silence / the grip you
place on me that places me in the direct path
of your gratification is undefinable / leaves me
envious of your ****oris

sounds crazy don't it...

a conscious man knows that within
that sacred temple are 8 thousand
nerve endings that send pleasure
to you
ASAP

how can a man's pleasure compare?

(c)2002 blakverb
 
truly

a most ingenius gift from the Creator Himself....something He devised solely for the intimate pleasure reserved for love. I love this poem and your recognition and appreciation of the mysterious wonder that a woman's orgasm is; external and internal....

God is so good.

And your scribe is a testimony, my "conscious" brotha! :)

thank you

a
 
interesting how...

the older we--men--get, the more we appreciate the climactic moment of a woman in the throes of orgasm. for me, the greatest joy of lovemaking is watching the woman orgasm.:)

8 thousand nerve endings, eh. maybe i should count them...one by one.

beautiful appreciation of love, verb.
let the flow continue {i meant that in every way.:)}
 

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