Black Poetry : 8 thousand ways to pleasure

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Feb 19, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    holding myself above you
    sweat jumping from the cliffs
    of my desires to their deaths
    implanting themselves into your
    soils to be reborn rebirthed and
    resuscitated as a moan from
    deep within you /

    / I watch the sheets bulge between
    your fingers that clutch them as if they
    can keep you from hovering outside of yourself
    to view a moment of release /

    I watch in envy because the man's orgasm
    is so primitive...pump pump pump...
    guussssssh...there it is, a salty gism on your
    walls that drains to the back of your leg
    and is reborn as a not so stubborn stain
    on the sheets...it doesn't even have the fortitude
    to stick around

    the female orgasm is like poetry in motion
    (but so far beyond that tired cliche')
    from what i see it's like walking barefoot through
    morning grass and letting the birth of a new day
    shape your existence for the next 24 hours
    or innocent toddler crayon markings on a white wall
    ...unadulterated beauty

    that quick breath you take before the tightening of
    muscles / the electricity of choppy moans before the
    one that eclipses the worlds silence / the grip you
    place on me that places me in the direct path
    of your gratification is undefinable / leaves me
    envious of your ****oris

    sounds crazy don't it...

    a conscious man knows that within
    that sacred temple are 8 thousand
    nerve endings that send pleasure
    to you
    ASAP

    how can a man's pleasure compare?

    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak (Through & Through)

    And you are so EXACT! Never have you been more right Blak!! :) These facts are so eloquently stated -- yet, they are also "tried-tested-& true"...

    N2 :wink:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truly

    a most ingenius gift from the Creator Himself....something He devised solely for the intimate pleasure reserved for love. I love this poem and your recognition and appreciation of the mysterious wonder that a woman's orgasm is; external and internal....

    God is so good.

    And your scribe is a testimony, my "conscious" brotha! :)

    thank you

    a
     
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    interesting how...

    the older we--men--get, the more we appreciate the climactic moment of a woman in the throes of orgasm. for me, the greatest joy of lovemaking is watching the woman orgasm.:)

    8 thousand nerve endings, eh. maybe i should count them...one by one.

    beautiful appreciation of love, verb.
    let the flow continue {i meant that in every way.:)}
     
  5. blackfox

    blackfox Active Member MEMBER

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    Tight Scribe!

    You have described a
    lovely phenomenon of a woman's orgasm, bro!
    Its a pleaure when you can be the man to bring
    her to that sensual peak and explosion.


    blackfox
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLak Man.


    ****...

    (i'm speech-less)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so glad u shared the secret!

    U obviously have done your homework about the 8 thousand nerves (did u watch the vagina monologues on HBO?) Anyhoo, please share the secret with the others who think that the pump pump is all it takes!!!! I sho appreciate this hea brotha!
     
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    WoW! Blak! yo sho gave a brotha a lesson man...
    As we get older we appreciate the woman and her orgasmic ways, well at least I do. I wish I wouldn't have spent my time pumping so much when I was younger...
    Tyte scribe poet!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    teach me as u will coz i be learning som'em here
    man ya skills r glowing bright bru...
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak....

    Dawg, this is "****-hot"!!!!!

    Immeasurable talent my brotha!!!

    :peace:/respect
    GQ
     
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